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Your Fantasy Creature

Talofa Room 19,

We are now midway through the term and you have been creating all sorts of new possibilities through fantasy. An example of this is the fantasy monster pictures and descriptions you made last week.

Your task is to write about the fantasy creature you created. Use the description you made earlier and give lots of detail. You should use similes and metaphors, adjectives and rich language to really make your creature come to life! Tell us about it's appearance and behavior. Here is an example:


                              Paddalak

Let me introduce you to Paddalak. Paddalak is usually a friendly and gentle natured creature who lives in lakes and rivers. He loves to eat small frogs and fish but when Paddalak gets hungry, he gets grumpy! He throws tantrums like thunderstorms and it is best to keep your distance at these times.

The rest of the time however, Paddalak is a puppy dog who just wants to play with you. His favorite game is fetch and when you throw a stick into the water, he shoots off like a missile to grab it. He has teeth like needles and eyes like shimmering emerald marbles. His tail swooshes back and forth when he swims and his skin is smooth like a boiled egg. 

If you ever meet Paddalak lying on a rock or swimming on the surface, you could go and say kia ora! He likes to be tickled under the chin and if you give him some frogs to gobble down, he might even perform one of his special moves for you (such as blowing water out of his ears or doing a triple back-flip out the water and into the air).  One thing is for sure- Paddalak is a special type of creature.



24 comments:

  1. Spereash

    Greetings my name is Simranjot.

    Today I am going to introduce my fantasy character her name is Spereash.
    Spereash is the only one left in world she likes to live by her self. She likes to drink boy blood If you are under 16 then you are save. You can be tricked by her easily because she is half fairy and half vampire.

    If you ever meet her carry a torch with you because you might get killed. Spereash is really selfish she gets angry If you stepped at her property.
    Usauly find her in old caves and dark homes.

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  2. Buenos Dias my name is Samantha and this is my creature.

    My creatures name is Dirt Supaclee and he is an always hungry monster. He loves to eat dirt and dead insects. His head shape is a right angled triangle. He doesn't have feet he has got a flying magnet that makes him fly. Dirt does not like humans he just likes to play with animals. If he sees you Dirt wont do much harm he will just run away. Dirt live in Mars.

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  3. Hi my name is Will and I am going to tell you about my mysterious monster.

    Name:The hairy chopper
    Location:Auckland city
    Gruesome lvl:5 fatal
    This monster can kill a lot of people thats why stay away from it. This monster is called the hairy chopper.He has really sharp teeth that can devour anything.It lives in Auckland city.It likes to eat other meat creatures.This monsters fur can warm you up in the North Pole.
    Survival tip:Take some garlic wit you because it makes it sneeze for 5 minutes.It gives you enough time to escape or just fly to another country.

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  4. Hi my name is Avitesh and I am going tell you about my fantasy monster.

    Name: Colotow

    Location: Jungles of Barcelona.

    Gruesome level: ****

    Description: This cat can kill anyone if it scratches them. It loves to hunt in day and night time.

    Survival tips: Stay away from colorful cats in Barcelona and keep a ball with you so when you will show it to the cat and it will be attracted to it and if you throw it, the cat will get scared and run away.

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  5. Kia Ora my name is Jewels and i am going to tell you about my fantasy creature.

    Name: Zapracon Monster

    Location: U.S.A California

    Gruesome Level: ******

    Description: It loves sucking your blood especially men, it feels very very disgusting and slimy and it is as fast as a blink of an eye. It loves Kidnaping people. It's favorite food is human, it's favorite drink is blood. Also when it sees people it will kidnap you strait away.

    Survival Tip: Always hide in dark places because it will not be able to find you but be warned that it might touch you in the dark.

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  6. Greetings my name is Mele and this is my fantasy monster.

    Name:Beck Face

    Location: mount and forest

    Gruesome Level: 5

    Description: It has 3 eye, 2 legs,1 wing with a lightening bolt on it and sharp teeth. It eat any met for example humans. Beck Face’s power is super speed. It hunts it the forest and mounts. They live in the forest and high or tall mounts. All that Beck Face mostly do is eat all day long.

    Survival Tip: Never go camping in the forest or on mounts.

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  7. Hi my name is Himachal and I’m going to talk about my monster.

    Name:Eggshan

    Age:Not available,prediction[1,000,000 years old]

    Description:
    Appearance:He is a human sized rooster with a razor sharp mohawk,has a beak that can breath fire.It has bent legs,4 wings[2 small & 2 big].

    Behavior:It takes soles of strong and smart children.

    Habitat:In a trash can behind a soccer field.

    Prey:Feeds only on human soles to survive.

    Survival tip: don’t look smart or strong in front of a eggshan or your a goner.

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  8. Hi my name is William and I’m going to tell you about my story monster.

    Name: Oil-Toxic

    Appearance: It has no eye’s. The oil is in the left side and the toxic is in the right side.

    Behavior: it’s a bad poison monster that will kill people. Oil-Toxic senses other people in the town from the forest. He goes to the town and poisons them all. After that he goes back to the forest.


    Habitat: Oil-Toxic lives in the forest to hide from other people because he is afraid of human-beings. He’s a bad monster. He lives underground near the moles. He eats them for dinner, breakfast, lunch and morning tea. He is a greedy monster.

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  9. Aloha my name is Korey and i'm Going to tell u about my monster Rage Hunter

    Name:Rage Hunter

    Appearance:Rage Hunter has one eye,devilhorns,sharp fangs and razor sharp claws

    Habitat:Rage Hunter lives in the NZ army base because he was sent from the future to save NZ.

    Survivail tip:

    Don't stress him out
    HE WILL GET ANGRY

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  10. Hi my name is Matthew and my fantasy creature.


    name: Soneain


    appearance: Lost of horns and fangs and it looks ghostly.


    habitat:In a dark cave.

    surival tip: You're gonna die!

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  11. Hi my name is Jaylen and I’m going to talk about my monster.

Name:Paddle

Age:Not available,prediction[1,000,000 years old]


Appearance:He is a human sized like our fish with a razor sharp mohawk,has a beak that can breath fire.It has sloppy legs.

Behavior:It takes soles of strong and smart children like room 19

Habitat:In a trash can behind a soccer field.

Prey:Feeds only on human soles to survive.

Survival tip: Make sure you go to another planet.

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  12. Hi my name is Michael I am going to tell you about my monster.
    NAME: Monsterdog
    LOCATION: Monster house in the woods
    GRUESOME LEVEL: 100%
    DESCRIPTION: Is very hairy has big long yellow teeth eats everything he comes across.
    PERSONALITY:Mean and evil all the time
    SURVIVAL TIP: Run for your life

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  13. Aloha My name is Tangata and I'm going to tell you about my monster Green Strawberry Head

    Name:Green Strawberry Head

    Location:In a drain near you

    Gruesome level: 5 out of 5

    Description:red and green with razors for fingers and a green slimey head

    Personality: hes bad all over

    Survival Tip: you cannot survive

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  14. Hi my name is Robert and I am going to tell you about my monster.

    Name: Reptile monster.

    Location: UK

    Description: It has scales on both sides of it's body. It also has 2 bat wings, two sloppy arms and 25 tentacles. He eats all types of meat and brain. It catches you with his tentacles and rips you apart and eats you.

    Survival Tip: Always have tomato sauce with you.

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  15. Hi my name is Mac and I will be talking about my monster Big Foot.

    Name: BigFoot.
    Age: 0129387465 years old
    Apperance: He has a big foot, sharp nails, one eye, sharp teeth, very hairy, and very hideous.
    Food: Big Foot loves eating bugs and humens.
    Weakness: broccoli
    Survial tip: Throw a bag of broccoli at Big Foot if he is chasing you.

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  16. Aloha and hello

    Hi my name is Ritik and I am going to tell you about my fantasy monster.

    Name:TITAN
    AGE:58
    APPEARANCE:HE HAS SHARP NAILS,HALFED FACE AND SHARP TEETH.
    FOOD:HE LOVES EATING MEAT ESPECIALLY SHARKS.
    WEAKNESS:VEGETABLES
    STRENGTH:MEAT
    HOBBY:SEARCH AND DESTROY
    SURVIVAL TIP:IF TITAN IS TRYING TO DESTROY YOU MAKE HIM EAT VEGETABLES.

    AFTER READING THIS PLEASE TRY THE SURVIVAL TIP AND I AM SERIOUS YOU WILL NEED THEM!!!!!!.

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  17. Zolkial

    Hi my name is Petaia and i am going to talk to you about my monster.

    NAME: ZOLKIAL

    LOCATION:SCOTLAND

    GRUSOME LEVEL:*****

    Details:

    This monster lives in a loch in scotland it is very very very dangerous.It has red strong teeths, it has 2 eyes, 2 mouths it has big strong arms. It lives in volcanos in scotland and sometimes in a loch or a river.

    Surival Tip:

    RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!
    RUN TO THE NEAREST AIR PORT!!!!!!!!!
    FART THEN IT WILL CRY THEN RUN AWAY!!!!!!!!!!
    THROW SMOKE BOMBS THEN RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  18. Hi my name is Dean and i will talking my monster Madussa .
    Name:Madussa
    Age:217872634872467 years old
    Apperance:She has a snake hair and a rattle snake tail
    Weakness: Cut of his her
    Survial tip: Never look at her eyes because you change into stone

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  19. Aloha my name is Tyson and I am going to tell you about my maori monster.

    Name:Scruffster
    Location:Maori Town, Auckland
    Gruesome Level:4
    Appearance:Scruffy fur, Red sparkling eyes, black tail

    This monster can eat what it wants while it takes it midnight strokes especially maori food. It's favorite food is Hangi and Boil up. It will use its ninja skills to steal the leftovers and it will eat it all and leave the dishes. When it does that it will start running of laughing like a maniac. When it finishes it could go crazy and kill you.

    Survival Tip: Hide your leftovers of any maori food or eat it all.

    WARNING:Real Maori monster be careful

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  20. Aloha my name is Anna and I'm tell about my monster I created.

    Name: Third horn
    Location: England , London
    gruesome level: 4
    description:

    the third horn has 3 horns that senses if someone is looking at them and that is where they get their name from. he’s got 6 arms to hold on to you if you try to move he will just hold on to you harder. the third horn eats kids and adults under 59. the third horn only hunts at night because if a bit of light will burn it and it will monte. if you look into it’s eyes you will fall asleep. he goes into your room and holds onto you with it’s 4 arms and uses it other 2 arms to take your brain out. then puts you into its tummy but inside it has teeth that bites you into pieces.

    survival tip:

    rip one of his hair and put it in it’s tummy than it will blow up
    or flash light on it.

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  21. Ola my name is Sheilagh and I am going to tell you about my maori monster.

    Name:Griffin Jaw
    Location:Maori City Napier
    Gruesome Level:4
    Appearance:Golden arms,mohook full of snakes,colorful wings,tanewha and a back tail.

    this only eats Maori food like thousands of hangi's but his favorite foods is pork bones,water cress and dow boys.He is the dangerous creature that ever lived.sometimes if he is bored he will come behind you and turn you into stone

    SURVIVAL TIPS
    Don't look at the snakes or his eyes and if he comes at you make sure you stones and big hang so he can let you go.

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  22. Kia Ora my name is Tane and I am going to tell you about Bantock my fantasy monster.

    Appearance

    Bantock has one eye and he is a ghost. He shoots a lazier out of his eye has a ripped cape and its pink on the inside and the outside is black.

    Behavior

    My monster eats human flesh and insides. like liver, souls and more. His most favorite part is Soul. His second favorite is the Hart but he doesn't come alive again. he absolutely hates bones. It is not friendly at all.

    Habitat

    This monster is a vagrant (Has no home) hunter in Scotland he is usually found around his families graves.

    Other Information & Survival Tips

    Only the smartest of people can escape this monster. So stay away from this monster.

    Gruesome Rating

    usually fatal.

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  23. Hi my name is Angelina and today I am going to tell you about my fantasy monster.

    Name: Stripy
    Location: New York City
    Gruesome level: 3
    AppearanceHe has one eye, stripes, sharp claws and diamond fingers.

    Description

    My monster likes to eat any thing that is stripy because it gives him more power. My monster likes to hunt with his moth open because It looks like a hole, in case he see"s a stripy insect. My monster lives in the bushes or the trees.

    SURVIVAL TIP
    you have to shave one of hie stripes or run for your life.

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  24. Hi my name is Priya and I am going to tell you about my monster.
    Name:iddas
    Location: caves
    Gruesome Level: 2
    Appearance: Has four arms and two wonky legs.
    Survival tip: Don’t go near caves at night or run fast when massive lights turn up.

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