Here is a framework and example of a great recount. The framework is to help you structure your recount.
Read the recount about a trip to the museum. Your task is to leave a comment to tell me what you think is great about this recount. Use the recount success criteria in your writing books as a guide. The usual blog rules apply.
Example of a Great Recount
Ciao you are now on line with Cody and Will and we are going to tell you the positives of this recount.The reason why we enjoy reading the recount is because it has stunning descriptive language .And also it is in chronological order by using the story from beginning to end.But we mainly loved that they used the most important rule of a recount which is write in the past tense.
ReplyDeleteHey my name is Roneel + Ritik and together we will tell you what was interesting in the paragraph.
ReplyDeleteIt was lots of details and good experience about past.
Theres is full stops,capital letters,good sentence,adjectives.
We liked he used after,then,first,next and so on.
It was original and quality work we enjoyed it.
Namaste and Salam this is Samantha and Priya these are some good recount features we noticed.
ReplyDeleteWe noticed that the author had used time connectives in the correct places and also that the author had put the events in chronological order and in paragraphs.
Aloha my name is Korey and i'm going to tell what good things I noticed about this recount was
ReplyDeleteI noticed that put the events in chronological order and in paragraphs. it is in past tence and also use's,adjectives,verbs and similies.it also use's descriptive language
Talofa our names are Nabeel and Shivneel and we are going to say what we think is positive about The Museum recount.
ReplyDeleteWe think it is positive because it has everything that a recount should have like..
Paragraphs for each idea, adjectives to describe an object so the reader can have a better image in their head, chronological order which means everything is from first to last, conclusion to rap up the recount, punctuation like capital letters, commas, etc.
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Hi my name Himachal and I'm going to give a comment to this persons recount.
ReplyDeleteThis persons recount is in past tense,is in chronological order, is using descriptive language, they are expressing their feelings and saying how they liked and disliked that day .
It is set in paragraphs ,it has the intro ,body and the conclusion to finish the recount.
Greetings my name is Simranjot today I am Going to tell you about Example of Great Recount The museum
ReplyDeleteMy comment on the recount is that the Ideas are split up in to paragraphs.
The person used Intresting laguage like..............
-Time Connectives
-Adverbs
-Cronological order
-Correct puntuatin
-Conjunctions
-Adjectives
Aloha my name is Tyson and I am going to tell you about the example of Great Recount The museum .
ReplyDeleteI found out that the writer put the story in chronological order and used a lot of Time Connectives past tense and adjectives. I also noticed that the writer used paragraphs to group his/her ideas.